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History Personal Statement

Using our trusted strategies, we can help you learn how to write a successful personal statement for Oxbridge History.

Oxbridge History Personal Statement

Within 48 hours, we'll send you feedback on your Oxbridge History personal statement.

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Personal statements for every course

Our Oxbridge tutors have first-hand experience of writing personal statements for a range of programmes, including Oxbridge History. They can help you craft a strong and compelling Oxbridge History personal statement by ensuring that essential details are included and that you write in the appropriate tone.

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In a nutshell...

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How it Works...

Why are some candidates rejected from Oxbridge History programmes? The main reason is that they lack a compelling personal statement. Knowing what to include in your Oxbridge History personal statement and how to impress the admissions tutors can be difficult. Watch this video to find out how we can support you.

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How Oxbridge Mind’s Personal Statement Check works

Many applicants for the Oxbridge History programmes aren't offered a place because their personal statements do not meet the high standards expected for Oxbridge candidates.

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How we can help

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Response in
48 hours

  • Send
  • Analyse
  • Improve
  • Submit

You can send us your Oxbridge History personal statement at any stage of writing, whether it's your first or final draft. We can also help you to work on any areas that you're worried about, such as fitting the word count or linking in relevant work experience.

Our expert tutors will carefully review your Oxbridge History personal statement and provide an evaluation of what you have done well and where there's room to make some changes.

Once you've read your feedback, you'll have the knowledge and skills to make improvements to your Oxbridge History personal statement. If you'd like, you can then send us another draft to review.

After making your improvements, all you to do is submit your Oxbridge History personal statement to UCAS. Easy, right?

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Line-by-line
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Your Oxbridge History personal statement will be attentively reviewed by our Oxbridge History tutors to make sure it matches our high standards.

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Complete with an
analysis summary

We will provide you with line-by-line analysis for your Oxbridge History personal statement, as well as comments on how you performed in each of the crucial areas that the Oxbridge History team will be focusing on.

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Write, revise and
repeat

Consider the improvements we've recommended after reading our feedback for your Oxbridge History personal statement. You are welcome to get in touch with us at any stage for more guidance or to ask for another Oxbridge History personal statement review!

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1-1 sessions with
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Your Oxbridge History tutor will evaluate your History personal statement and provide some initial feedback prior to your one-on-one meeting to make the most of the time you have together.

You can go over your Oxbridge History personal statement with your tutor in real-time and receive ongoing advice.

Following the session, you can revise your Oxbridge History personal statement at your own pace and reach out to your tutor if you have any more questions.

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Reducing word count

Your Oxbridge History tutor can help you to reduce your word count by condensing your writing to include the points with the most impact.

Work Experience

Your Oxbridge tutor can help you make the connection between your interest in History and experience that you have, and then help you to integrate that into your writing.

Spelling and Grammar

The spelling, grammar, tone and structure of your Oxbridge History personal statement will all be carefully reviewed by our expert tutors.

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Extra Reading

Your tutor can help you to link books you've read or talks you've been to with specific components of the Oxbridge History courses.

Motivation for History

You'll learn the best ways to explain why you want to study History at Oxbridge.

Language Style

Your tone of voice and writing structure will be carefully reviewed by your Oxbridge History tutor.

How can we improve
your Personal Statement?

  1. Personal Analysis

    Personalised feedback will be given after we have read your essay, rather than just a list of general suggestions.

  2. Reducing Word Count

    Since it can be challenging to keep under the 4,000 character limit, we will show you how to write more succinctly.

  3. Improving Language

    Our tutors have expertise in writing personal statements for Oxbridge History course with the correct tone and language.

  4. Grammar Checking

    We'll carefully review your Oxbridge History personal statement to ensure that your spelling and grammar is flawless.

  5. Reviewed by History Tutors

    Our expert tutors who are familiar with the Oxbridge admissions process will carefully review your History personal statement.

  6. 1-to-1 Feedback Lessons

    You will receive ongoing support from your tutor, so you can be sure that your Oxbridge History personal statement will be outstanding by the time you're ready to submit to UCAS.

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Saavan

Saavan

Jan 2020

I'm so thankful for the help Shameena gave! She managed to cut out 1,000 characters from my medicine personal statement! She also gave some great insights into how I could improve.

Vikalesh

Vikalesh

Jan 2020

Thanks to Oxbridge Mind's Personal Statement check I managed to get invited to 4 interviews! They were very quick in their turnaround, and were able to address the areas I needed to edit.

Robyn

Robyn

Jan 2020

I was surprised by how detailed Oxbridge Mind were in their feedback - they noticed things my head of sixth form didn’t. I liked the fact that I could Skype the tutor and discuss the edits through with her.

Zhao

Zhao

July 2019

I had my medicine personal statement reviewed 4 times by Oxbridge Mind and they went above and beyond what I expected! They are a group of enthusiastic and professional teachers!

Xheng

Xheng

October 2019

The feedback they gave was very constructive and helped me cut down words. They took extra care to make sure I understood the feedback they were giving, and implement it effectively.

Khadijah

Khadijah

September 2018

I would highly recommend the Oxbridge Mind medicine personal statement review. They made sure they didn't just rewrite my personal statement but instead gave some real individual feedback!

Ethan

Ethan

August 2017

I could not recommend this website more! I bought a medicine personal statement check from many companies but theirs was the best. They also responded within 24h before my UCAS deadline

Prabjhot

Prabjhot

August 2019

I had a two hour 1-1 session with Alice who was so helpful in cutting down my medicine personal statement. She helped me with my surgical work experience paragraph, which had a few lengthy sentences.

Jennifer

Jennifer

September 2019

The medicine personal statement check happened so quickly - I got it back instantly. I have no complaints at all! Speed was good - I got it back within 2 days. The analysis was detailed and clear to me.

Joy

Joy

August 2019

At first I was reluctant as I was skeptical that it was cheaper than most providers. However, I was very happy! My editor, Shameena, spotted grammar mistakes and helped me cut my word count

Duncan

Duncan

July 2019

If it wasn't for Oxbridge Mind, I would never have known how to write a medicine personal statement so well. They helped teach me how to make links between my work experience and my skills.

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Our packages

Your personal statement will be reviewed by an expert Oxbridge Mind tutor, and all of our packages come with grammar, language, and content checks. Your Oxbridge History personal statement will be sent back to you within 48 hours, whichever package you choose, or you can get a full refund.

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1 Check

1 Personal Statement Check

  • 1 Personal Statement Check
  • Expert Feedback in 48h
  • Real-Time Feedback
  • Grammar Checking
  • Analysis on Character Limit
  • Writing Suggestions
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2 Checks

2 Personal Statement Checks

  • 2 Personal Statement Checks
  • Expert Feedback in 48h
  • Real-Time Feedback
  • Grammar Checking
  • Analysis on Character Limit
  • Writing Suggestions
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3 Checks

3 Personal Statement Checks

  • 3 Personal Statement Checks
  • Expert Feedback in 48h
  • Real-Time Feedback
  • Grammar Checking
  • Analysis on Character Limit
  • Writing Suggestions

Our proven
4-Step Method

Step 1

Send

Send us your Oxbridge History personal statement

You can send us your Oxbridge History personal statement at any stage of writing, whether it’s your first or final draft. We can also help you to work on any areas that you’re worried about, such as fitting the word count or linking in relevant work experience.

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Analyse

We’ll analyse your Oxbridge History personal statement

Our expert tutors will carefully review your Oxbridge History personal statement and provide an evaluation of what you have done well and where there’s room to make some changes.

Step 3

Improve

Write, Revise & Repeat

Once you’ve read your feedback, you’ll have the knowledge and skills to make improvements to your Oxbridge History personal statement. If you’d like, you can then send us another draft to review.

Step 4

Submit

Submit and Relax

After making your improvements, all you to do is submit your Oxbridge History personal statement to UCAS. Easy, right?

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