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Medicine Personal Statement

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Medicine Personal Statement

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Personal statements for every course

Our team has written personal statements for a variety of courses, including Oxbridge Medicine. They understand what it takes to write a good one and will assist you in tailoring yours to the universities you've applied to.

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In a nutshell...

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How it Works...

Many candidates miss out on a place at medical school because their medicine personal statement isn’t up to scratch. It’s often hard to know exactly what to write in your medicine personal statement and how to catch interviewers’ attention. Watch this video to see how we can help you.

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How Medic Mind’s PS Check works

Many miss out on medical school –
because their medicine personal statement isn't up to scratch.

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How we can help

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Response in
48 hours

  • Send
  • Analyse
  • Improve
  • Submit

Send us your personal statement, whether it's a first, ninth, or final version. You can also tell us if you want us to concentrate on a specific topic, such as word count or work experience.

Our specialists will thoroughly review your Oxbridge Medicine personal statement and provide you with their analysis of what you did well and where you can improve.

You will be able to improve your Oxbridge Medicine personal statement after receiving our input. Please feel free to submit us another draft at this point!

After you have completed all of the improvements, you can finally upload your medicine personal statement to UCAS. What a sigh of relief!

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Line-by-line
feedback

We are highly meticulous here at Oxbridge Mind, and our team of doctors will check every word of your Oxbridge Medicine personal statement to ensure it matches our high standards.

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Complete with an
analysis summary

In addition to providing a line-by-line analysis of your Oxbridge Medicine personal statement, we will provide feedback on how you performed in each of the important areas that medical school admissions committees look for.

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Write, revise and
repeat

After reviewing our feedback, make and apply the adjustments we advised. You are welcome to contact us at any moment for additional information or to request another Oxbridge Medicine personal statement check!

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1-1 sessions with
Skype Tutoring

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  • Discuss & Rewrite LIVE
  • Submit

Before your one-on-one session, your mentor will go over your Oxbridge Medicine personal statement and provide some preliminary suggestions to ensure that every minute counts.

You can communicate with your mentor in real-time, and you can go over your Oxbridge Medicine personal statement with ongoing feedback.

Following the session, you can continue to modify your Oxbridge Medicine personal statement at your leisure and contact your mentor if you have any additional queries.

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Let’s work through an example

Reducing word count

You could condense the entire paragraph to make it more concise (see example at end of document)

Work Experience

There's no connection between your MOOC and your work experience here - it needs to read more like a story.

Spelling and Grammar

Your spelling and punctuation have been flawless up to this point! Don't be concerned about employing sophisticated language.

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Extra-curriculars

It would be helpful to tie this back to medicine and demonstrate why this is crucial to have as a doctor.

Motivation for Medicine

This is an excellent start! However, you must demonstrate how this piqued your interest in medicine, such as an appreciation for the human body.

Language Style

Good use of the active voice, but make sure your statements are no more than two sentences.

How can we improve
your Personal Statement?

  1. Personal Analysis

    Rather of providing you general advise, we'll go over what you've written and provide a personalised input.

  2. Reducing Word Count

    The 4,000 character limit can be difficult to stick to, but we will help you become more precise in your writing.

  3. Improving Language

    All of our tutors are experienced teachers who have excelled in the exam and use our tried-and-true tactics.

  4. Grammar Checking

    The Oxbridge Medicine personal statement with poor language will get rejected by universities; we'll make sure you don't.

  5. Reviewed by Doctors

    Your Oxbridge Medicine personal statement will be proofread by doctors who understand what Oxford and Cambridge universities want.

  6. 1-to-1 Feedback Lessons

    Throughout the process, you will be tutored to ensure that your medicine personal statement is up to par.

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Saavan

Saavan

Jan 2020

I'm so thankful for the help Shameena gave! She managed to cut out 1,000 characters from my medicine personal statement! She also gave some great insights into how I could improve.

Vikalesh

Vikalesh

Jan 2020

Thanks to Oxbridge Mind's Personal Statement check I managed to get invited to 4 interviews! They were very quick in their turnaround, and were able to address the areas I needed to edit.

Robyn

Robyn

Jan 2020

I was surprised by how detailed Oxbridge Mind were in their feedback - they noticed things my head of sixth form didn’t. I liked the fact that I could Skype the tutor and discuss the edits through with her.

Zhao

Zhao

July 2019

I had my medicine personal statement reviewed 4 times by Oxbridge Mind and they went above and beyond what I expected! They are a group of enthusiastic and professional teachers!

Xheng

Xheng

October 2019

The feedback they gave was very constructive and helped me cut down words. They took extra care to make sure I understood the feedback they were giving, and implement it effectively.

Khadijah

Khadijah

September 2018

I would highly recommend the Oxbridge Mind medicine personal statement review. They made sure they didn't just rewrite my personal statement but instead gave some real individual feedback!

Ethan

Ethan

August 2017

I could not recommend this website more! I bought a medicine personal statement check from many companies but theirs was the best. They also responded within 24h before my UCAS deadline

Prabjhot

Prabjhot

August 2019

I had a two hour 1-1 session with Alice who was so helpful in cutting down my medicine personal statement. She helped me with my surgical work experience paragraph, which had a few lengthy sentences.

Jennifer

Jennifer

September 2019

The medicine personal statement check happened so quickly - I got it back instantly. I have no complaints at all! Speed was good - I got it back within 2 days. The analysis was detailed and clear to me.

Joy

Joy

August 2019

At first I was reluctant as I was skeptical that it was cheaper than most providers. However, I was very happy! My editor, Shameena, spotted grammar mistakes and helped me cut my word count

Duncan

Duncan

July 2019

If it wasn't for Oxbridge Mind, I would never have known how to write a medicine personal statement so well. They helped teach me how to make links between my work experience and my skills.

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Our packages

All of our packages include grammar, structure, and content comments. A current doctor will assess your personal statement. Rest certain that whichever bundle you choose, you will receive your Oxbridge Medicine personal statement within 48 hours or your money back.

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1 Check

1 Personal Statement Check

  • 1 Personal Statement Check
  • Expert Feedback in 48h
  • Real-Time Feedback
  • Grammar Checking
  • Analysis on Character Limit
  • Writing Suggestions
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2 Checks

2 Personal Statement Checks

  • 2 Personal Statement Checks
  • Expert Feedback in 48h
  • Real-Time Feedback
  • Grammar Checking
  • Analysis on Character Limit
  • Writing Suggestions
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3 Checks

3 Personal Statement Checks

  • 3 Personal Statement Checks
  • Expert Feedback in 48h
  • Real-Time Feedback
  • Grammar Checking
  • Analysis on Character Limit
  • Writing Suggestions

Our proven
4-Step Method

Step 1

Send

Send us your Oxbridge Medicine personal statement?

Whether it’s a first, ninth or final draft, send us your personal statement. You can also tell us if you want us to concentrate on a specific topic, such as word count or work experience.

Step 2

Analyse

We’ll analyse your Oxbridge Medicine personal statement?

Our specialists will thoroughly review your medicine personal statement and provide you with their analysis of what you did well and where you can improve.

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Improve

Write, Revise & Repeat ?

After receiving our feedback, you should feel ready to improve your medicine personal statement. Feel free to send us another draft at this stage!

Step 4

Submit

Submit and Relax?

After you have completed all of the modifications, you can finally publish your Oxbridge Medicine personal statement to UCAS. What a sigh of relief!

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